Essay Feedback and improvements needed.

-Check Harvard Referncing
-Make sure i use at least 12 sources
-Correct misunderstandings of 'The Gaze' in context with the image
-DO NOT USE 1st PERSON
-Explicitly use termonology
-Change the structure




Structure needs to be:


Outline gaze theory- Coward then Berger then Mulvey
The apply to the example